A New Piece...With Less of a Question.

Original Try

Reference photograph

Most Recent Try

I'm much happier with the newer result. The first was congested and messy, while the newer seems much better laid out and clear. There's a lot left to be done to really set up a dynamic composition, but it's interesting to see how a simple change in the scale of the line can change the results to such a degree.

Here's a link to yesterday's original post and explanation.
http://marionart23.blogspot.com/2012/11/a-new-piece-in-question.html